Wonderfully written, and I think you got Susan's personality captured perfectly. It's true, the Caspian/Susan relationship gives Susan a TRUE reason to reject Narnia. I sort of hated Lucy for a second, even Caspian... in my little delusional world, there's no Ramandu's daughter and Caspian pines for Susan forever or until Susan gets "forgiven" or whatever and gets to return.
Damn it! This is why i stick to AU... Canon is truly depressing, but I loved this fic.
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Wonderfully written, and I think you got Susan's personality captured perfectly. It's true, the Caspian/Susan relationship gives Susan a TRUE reason to reject Narnia. I sort of hated Lucy for a second, even Caspian... in my little delusional world, there's no Ramandu's daughter and Caspian pines for Susan forever or until Susan gets "forgiven" or whatever and gets to return.
Damn it! This is why i stick to AU... Canon is truly depressing, but I loved this fic.
Keep writing Caspian/Susan please!